The meeting. (Fifty Challenge)

Finally, after three hours of sitting in silence, I came to bow before her.  Kneeling, I gently placed my hands on her bare feet she had tucked beneath green silk and golden embroidery.  A hundred pair of eyes before me and yet she looked at me with a fresh curiosity.

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41 thoughts on “The meeting. (Fifty Challenge)

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  2. So awesome! This Fifty makes me think – maybe you should continue the story? Who is the girl? What is the relationship? etc etc. But I guess it’ll ‘ruin’ the purpose of Fifty.

    Anyway, thanks for mentioning my blog!

    1. Thanks for the comment! I could tell that story one day…it’s a true story. I have so many notes for things to write about and not enough time to write them! Patience, right? 🙂 Thanks again!

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